Excellent Job
Sha, your ability to create the story with so much emotion and attachment is rare for Newgrounds. I'm saddened that other people are unable to appreciate the dedication you've put into the story of your brother, and I hope you are able to look past their reviews. You've done an excellent job with what you've done so far and you have obviously made progress in the animation aspect of the story. I want you to know that your story, although still uncomplete, has touched me greatly. I hope you get everything you want to achieve out of this. I wish you the best.
Bryce Carter